"Grace looked deep into Peter's eyes. How she loved this man. God help her, but she loved him more with every word that came from his mouth."
Now, this is touching sentiment, and I could be moved if the author had convinced me that Grace and Peter actually knew each other and should be together. As it was, the way the story went, it sets it up so that these two people barely spend any time together, don't really talk to each other, and don't really know each other; yet they fall deeply in love. Is that even possible? How do you fall in love with someone you don't even know? Or am I just being naive?
Stories like this make me want to vomit because I think some women may consider these stories as a "safe and clean" way to get the romantic stories we want, without all the graphic sex we know we shouldn't be reading. These stories hit women right where it counts - the handsome, brave, sensitive man sweeps the beautiful, carefree woman right off her feet by the words he says and the way he treats her, while trying to steal a kiss or two.
Writing like this has convinced me again that one of the all-time best love story put into fiction is Anne and Gilbert. In contrast to the line above, consider this line from L.M. Montgomery, as she describes Gilbert's thoughts as Anne approaches him on their wedding day:
"She was his at last, this evasive, long-sought Anne, won after years of patient waiting. It was to him she was coming in her sweet surrender of the bride. Was he worthy of her? Could he make her as happy as he hoped? If he failed her - if he could not measure up to her standard of manhood - then, as she held out her hand, their eyes met and all doubt was swept away in a glad certainty. They belonged to each other; and, no matter what life might hold for them, it could never alter that. Their happiness was in each other's keeping and both were unafraid."
Now that's what I call a love story!
3 comments:
Now that's what I call a love story!
Amen!
*sigh*
I love Anne and Gilbert together.
Here, Here! I totally agree with you Amanda! Gilbert and Anne are legendary - and way more realistic, believable and unquestionably one of the most romantic couples in literary history. I actually think that the writers of a few generations (and more) before us knew how to write romance. Authors now would do some good to study up on classic romantic characters and stick to what works. And from my experience when you are really, helplessly in love with someone – you want to be around them all the time. It really does feel like an addiction – at least it did for me. And had I not spent all that time around the man that I was in love with…I am not sure I would have gotten to know him well enough to really LOVE him. The marriage, till death do us part kind of love. Where even when I am angry with him I can still look at him and tell him that I love him kind of love.
P.S. I too hate reading Christian Fiction because of this really inadequate ability to write a romantic story line.
you are such an Anne nerd...they should make Scene it Anne of Green Gables(sorry if I spelled it wrong..I am a star trek nerd not an Anne nerd) you would totally win!
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